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	<title>Comments on: Writing Documentation Like a Real, Live Person</title>
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	<description>Technical Communication and Other Writing Topics (by Ben Minson)</description>
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		<title>By: When can I say &#8220;janky&#8221; in my on-screen text? &#124; I'd Rather Be Writing - Tom Johnson</title>
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		<dc:creator>When can I say &#8220;janky&#8221; in my on-screen text? &#124; I'd Rather Be Writing - Tom Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jul 2008 04:40:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] yesterday my colleague Ben was asking how I felt about the use of contractions in help. Contractions? We&#8217;ve moved far beyond [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Ben</title>
		<link>http://www.gryphonmountain.net/2008/07/writing-documentation-like-a-real-live-person/comment-page-1/#comment-1148</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jul 2008 22:50:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m definitely not going to go out of my way to use contractions, but rather to be more conscious of places where they could be appropriate. This new project isn&#039;t going to be localized, so that removes one complication.

I find it very surprising that contractions are considered at a high school reading level; it seems counterintuitive, since contractions are informal. Craig, do you remember where you read that? I&#039;m sure I heard the same statistic about the 8th grade, probably in my reading theory class in college. It&#039;s sad, really. I think good reading skills are a matter of getting books in kids&#039; hands at a very early age, but that&#039;s a soapbox for another time (and venue, perhaps).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m definitely not going to go out of my way to use contractions, but rather to be more conscious of places where they could be appropriate. This new project isn&#8217;t going to be localized, so that removes one complication.</p>
<p>I find it very surprising that contractions are considered at a high school reading level; it seems counterintuitive, since contractions are informal. Craig, do you remember where you read that? I&#8217;m sure I heard the same statistic about the 8th grade, probably in my reading theory class in college. It&#8217;s sad, really. I think good reading skills are a matter of getting books in kids&#8217; hands at a very early age, but that&#8217;s a soapbox for another time (and venue, perhaps).</p>
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		<title>By: Craig</title>
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		<dc:creator>Craig</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jul 2008 14:53:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have read that understanding contractions requires a reading level higher than that which is average in the US right now. Reading levels used to be around the 10th grade. They are now around the 8th grade, and falling.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have read that understanding contractions requires a reading level higher than that which is average in the US right now. Reading levels used to be around the 10th grade. They are now around the 8th grade, and falling.</p>
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		<title>By: Char James-Tanny</title>
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		<dc:creator>Char James-Tanny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Jul 2008 23:48:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It does sound a bit stilted, does it not, when there are no contractions? ;-) 

However, the reason that most folks have stopped using them is because of translatations and localizations, and because those who have English as a second/third/fourth language sometimes find it harder to comprehend. I try to rewrite around them whenever possible.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It does sound a bit stilted, does it not, when there are no contractions? <img src='http://www.gryphonmountain.net/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' />  </p>
<p>However, the reason that most folks have stopped using them is because of translatations and localizations, and because those who have English as a second/third/fourth language sometimes find it harder to comprehend. I try to rewrite around them whenever possible.</p>
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